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Tuesday, August 1, 2017

Going to Mega Air for Hayley HB´s birthday

Going To Mega Air For Hayley HB´s Birthday!

One Warmish sunny Sunday Chloe T walked normally from her dad's house to my house. Chloe T´s dad´s house is only one house down from where I live. Chloe T and her dad came to my house because they were going to Hayley HB´s birthday party at Mega Air and so was I!

So off we drove excitingly to Hayley HB´s birthday party! When we arrived at Mega Air all of us gave Hayley HB her birthday presents. Next we had something to eat. The jaffa lumps were as orange as an orange. After we had some food we ran as fast as the fastest people having a race to watch the safety video before we were allowed on the tramps in Mega Air.It was my 2nd time at Mega Air! The safety video only took a couple of minutes to finish. The safety video talks about stuff like look out for other people, NO jumping head first onto the massive red and black airbag and jump with 2 feet because you could injure yourself. So when the safety video finished we ran to the dodgeball area and I got hit in the face with a ball and then my nose started bleeding for about one minute. Oh no! I whispered quietly to myself. The trampolines are more bouncy than regular ones. I bounced as high as a bird in the sky. It was so fun! The trampolines were as black as the sky at night. After 2 hours of  bouncing we had finished jumping for the day we had some more food! We ate and ate very hungrly.The chocolate cake was as soft as a pillow.

We all had an amazing time at mega air! Chloe T and I were so tired and our legs were sore.We raced tiredly to the car and drove home.I will definitely go again.

By Miriana

8 comments:

  1. Wow Miriana I really like the way you described the story and wrote the capitals at the right places and full stops at the right palces too.

    Nice work Miriana

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  2. Hi miriana love the work you did.How long did it take you to do this?You must have had a awesome time.

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  3. Kia Ora Miriana I love the work that you have put. I noticed you put lots of effort into it.
    :-)

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